Thursday 26 March 2015

Final Double Page Spread/ 1st Draft Comparsion (Feedback)

Before- (Draft 1)
 
 
After- (Final Product)


By listening to the last feedback of my draft I have produced a final ancillary product to clearly advertise and attract audiences to watch my Short. I enlarged the title to standout to viewers and clearly address the audience, encouraging them to watch the short. By deleting the text of 'coming to a cinema near you' helps the audience to become more understanding of where to view the short and see where its distributed. The critical acclaim helps the audience to see the success of the short encouraging them to watch it. Having it in the bottom corner doesn't draw the audience attention from the titles and the main picture, creating interest and connecting to the genre of Farming documentary. The background blends in and doesn't have black around, making it look over edited and unprofessional. By adding text on the right allows the audience to gain more information about the short and gets them more involved with the narrative. Giving them not only a visual look from the picture but information to backup the main focus, making them understand facts and stats on Farming life, giving them more of an insight.

Feedback on Final Product- 
From my overall feedback audiences are much happier with my results and understand where to view the short. The layout is clear and connects with showing the genre of farming to the audience not only through the colours of natural earthy themes such as greens and blues but through the style of font connecting the viewers to the message of farming.

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